My Goal

I want to tell you all why I do this…

hey gang,

I love to see you, reading this… this means that you like to read what I am writing down. First some info about me, I am from Holland, but I am on a bilingual system, so I learn a lot of English, but my English isnt that good. I am 14 years old, and my birthday is at the 10th of December, I hope you guys, will help me by correcting my English so I can learn it better, every week you might find a new story.

My goal is to get enough money to be member on Runescape, this is a nice game, which I like to play when I am bored, in need to make 7 stories each month, so you can read this a lot of times. My name at Runescape.com is Zegoras, it is chosen by my nephew.

But this was my FIRST story, I hope you guys (or girls) will help me correcting my English.

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  1. Posted November 16, 2009 at 10:16 pm

    wow dude seriously no one is gonna fall for this sht and get you free membership. try harder next time.

  2. some duds
    Posted November 17, 2009 at 7:44 am

    okay……

  3. vaibhav
    Posted November 17, 2009 at 9:20 am

    dude try second life it will make you rich and you will be able to buy runescape membership

  4. Posted November 17, 2009 at 10:04 am

    Hi there,
    I am the writer of this story…
    What do you guys mean with second life? is it a game, or is it something you can make money on…
    And you guys, cant you be any nicer, this was my first story, so I am trying to make it better.

  5. vaibhav
    Posted November 17, 2009 at 10:22 am

    sorry if I was rude to you second life is a game by lindex you can download it at secondlife.com

  6. Posted November 18, 2009 at 2:04 pm

    ok,
    I will go and find out…
    And if any of you have asubject to write about, just say it to me, and I will try to make a story out of it…

    The Best Greetings, Zegoras

  7. wacko!!
    Posted November 20, 2009 at 1:03 pm

    LMFAO are you a retard??

  8. MM
    Posted November 20, 2009 at 1:04 pm

    godverdomme ook nog dezelfde dag jarig als mij -.-

  9. Posted November 20, 2009 at 3:23 pm

    nou, gefeliciteerd dan….
    maar dan hoef je niet te schelden!!!
    Want Ik Ben Ook Nederlands, jammer….

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