The Sins of The Siblings

I suppose it’s only fair… I did write a story similar to this before but I felt like I had to improve.

Zeke… he wasn’t in a very good position 

Zeke had lived a very sheltered life

without too much companionship 

or any companionship when he thought about it

Zeke didn’t exactly know everything but Zeke knew enough

Zeke knew a good choice from a bad choice

Zeke knew when to walk away

However the thing about Zeke’s position 

is that his brothers didn’t know what Zeke knows

his brothers didn’t know a good choice from a bad choice

his brothers didn’t know when to walk away

and Zeke learned from that

Zeke’s father was not very convinced however

Zeke met some people, people that he introduced to his father.

people that could have been his friends

His father thought ” oh not Zeke too”. 

His father thought ” Oh Zeke will do what his brothers did”

His father yelled at the people

He chased them away, and with that

Zeke’s chance at having friends.

A word should still be said about the people who could have been friends

They were not the brightest of the generation, and they were not the best influences

The brightest and the best to hang out with in this town 

were sheltered like Zeke, they were hard to find

However these would be friends.. they were not the worst either

The worst hung out in the park

The worst were violent

Zeke knew better

but his brothers did not. 

and apparently.. thats all that matters

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